Hawaii Book Editing Project

Hawaii book editing

Author Lucas Kana

Princess Eyes

Imagine my surprise when Lucas Kana contacted me from the state of Hawaii. This gifted author wrote The Lei Crime Series: Princess Eyes, a murder mystery that began as one book and segued into two throughout the book editing process (Part 1 Book 1 and Part 2 Book 2).

Princess Eyes is the prequel to Blood Orchids by award winning, USA Today bestselling author Toby Neal—the very first in the Lei Crime Series.

As a Texan and fan of the series, I especially loved this Hawaii book editing project because it transported me to the paradise island of Oahu and Waikiki Beach. Lucas’ vivid descriptions of the landscape, landmarks and scenery are unique to the island, but the plot and premise was the real clincher:

Geeky Honolulu Lieutenant, Michael Stevens, teams up to investigate a series of homicides with Jenna Brooke, a streetwise psychologist for the FBI, which leads to the mysterious disappearance of a local beauty queen known as “Princess Eyes.” 

About the Author

Lucas grew up in Maui and studied philosophy, history and photography at the University of Hawaii-Manoa. He lives and works on Maui and is busy writing a new thriller set in Oahu, entitled Adverse Possession. Based on Princess Eyes, I can only imagine how riveting his new book will be!

“Melanie, I just wanted to tell you how much I appreciate all of your hard work. This has been intense and you’ve been wonderful. Thank you so much.” ~ Lucas Kana, Hawaii, author of The Lei Crime Series: Princess Eyes Part 1 Book 1 and Part 2 Book 2.

Do You Have  a Hawaii Book Editing Project?

Whether you are writing your own thriller, romance or self-help book, I can help with your manuscript. An extra pair of eyes strengthens your work and clears it of distractions. After all, everyone enjoys a well-written novel!

Questions? Let me know how I can help! Contact melaniesaxton@icloud.com.